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CV review help

 
#1 CV review help
25/05/2008 15:54

pmnsg

Hello ppl.

I want to apply for a position in a foreign country, therefore I built my english CV. As I'm not a native english, I am afraid of having language mistakes. Could anyone of you review my cv, please? It's urgent and only 2 pages! If yes, please give me your email address so I can send it to you

Thank you

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#2 RE: CV review help
25/05/2008 16:01

pmnsg to pmnsg (#1)

Maybe it would be better if I just paste the text to the forum.

Hear it goes:

"Responsible of conducting a variety of projects in all kinds of industries. The main projects include developing business plans, implementing accounting methods and processes improvement."

"Conducting analysis of specific areas within annual audit companies review"

"Experience within different areas, going from the warehouse to operator and other administrative roles."

"Our objective is to use our business education and expertise in order to help non-profit institutions on the formulation and implementation of their “business strategies”. Analysing the organization and its market we aim to develop suggestions that create value and improve society in a broad way."

"Captain of several volleyball teams, at different ages. I also played other collective and individual sports. Afterwards I coached a volleyball team at ..."

"Treasury Director of Student’s Committee of the 3rd and 4th years (Faculty..."

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#3 RE: CV review help
28/05/2008 07:36

anon to pmnsg (#2)

the following are purely grammatical and minor stylistic changes.

"Responsible for conducting a variety of projects in a range of industries. Main projects included developing business plans, accounting and process improvement."

"Analysing specific areas in annual audit of companies"

"Experienced in different areas, ranging from warehouse to operations and other administrative roles."

"Our objective is to use our business education and expertise in order to help non-profit institutions with the formulation and implementation of their “business strategies”. Analysing the organization and its market, we aim to develop suggestions that create value and improve society in a broad way."

"Played team and individual sports, including captaining and coaching volleyball teams at ..."

"Treasury Director of Students Committee of 3rd and 4th years (Faculty..."

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